So it's been a bit quiet lately and I've kept things to myself without updating what's been going on.
After the feedback and some discussions with my tutors I decided to shorten the opening (tightening it) so now he reacts quicker and this is what I showed to my class:
People agreed that it was an improvement and i received some feedback about making the camera start moving later (as he takes his first step).
Also there were some feedback on why he would push the slinky over the edge since it was not in the way and finally I got a tip to try to make him turn around quicker in the end (turn around as he exhales)
With these things in mind, I addressed them in the next version as well as improving some of the timing:
Instead of moving the slinky, I decided to make him just kick it off the step without placing his foot there. The camera now does only start to move as he takes his first step on the staircase. The ending I'm not quite sure I want to do the changes suggested, since I want him to lead with the eyes but I guess I will figure it out better as I go along adding more frames.
Here is a refined version based on the previous block:
I'm still awaiting feedback on this one though. I have also started preparing for the mime task.
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