After posting my previous WIP on Facebook I received the following notes:
Lauren Orrels: Remi, what those guys need are hawaian shirts! XD hehe! In terms of the animation I think it's coming along really well. There's a definite contrast in body language and attitude in the two characters.
Siobhan Fenton: Love the backdrop Remi, v effective [and the shirts!] Still think your guy in red needs to look away [full of himself] when the other guy looks at his watch OR you need him to notice the guy look at the watch and react to that in some way. Very good stuff.
I do think Lauren's idea about the shirts is cool but it's not what I had in mind and I'm not sure they will come across as door salesmen if I do so.
Siobhan's suggestion to make the main character appear more full of himself was a good idea and I have addressed that in this version:
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