Over the night until the lecture today, I had done as much as I could with my storytelling block for my mime. I wish I had more to show my class today but this is what I had so far:
One major difference that I've done from the storyboard is to remove the trunk and make him get what he needs from behind his back like in most cartoons. This is to simplify the idea and to shorten the animation as it is already quite long.
My classmates and lecturer thought it looks good so far but I need to make it more clear that he hits a wall as well as improving the poses when he is pushing against it, making him go down a bit and start pushing upwards.
When it comes to him hitting the wall, I'm sure it will look a lot better once I get more breakdowns in there as now it is a very rough block.
Still a lot to do, I'm barely half way so I will do what I can to have the whole block ready for Thursday's feedback session.
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