Already?
I'm surprised how quickly he has responded this time as I thought I now could put this task aside and focus on my mime while waiting.
But here are Ed's words on my animation so far:
I like that bit where he kicks the toy off the side of the steps. Everything is there for the exercise. You have succeeded in getting him to go upstairs for a reason, and you have conflict for him. I'm not hearing any sound on the animation now, so it is not possible to judge whether or not his reactions are good. That is still a heck of an obstacle course on the steps!
Nothing negative there really, but I can't believe that he still complains about how many toys I have in the staircase!
I have really cut it down a lot I think and it is after all supposed to be an obstacle course. Why would the character be so irritated if there was almost nothing to get passed?
I will ask in the class tomorrow and see what my fellow students and lecturer thinks about this.
For now, I still have to put this animation on hold so I can get through my mime as well as I still haven't finished my storytelling block and I can't wait to get started on my 11 second club piece.
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